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This poem was co-written by yours truly and UGLEE_GIRLIEE, she’s one amazing young writer I admire. CLICKHERE to view her blog.
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Fathers nag
To drive generations, life gives tag
Mothers turn head
New life dead, even before breath lead.
The seed, shame keeps grandmother dead
News of one in coming brings sorrow
Two lives lost, grandmother and tomorrow
The one that got away, an awful part
As silence must be only art.
Earth quakes at the coming of the misplaced one
Footsteps echo at the doorsteps of reality
Heartbeat doubles in counting
Why should innocence be this daunting?
Should Pandora be let loose?
Lest chaos oxygen?
For aren’t we all spawns of woman?
Of an unborn child robbed of choice
Of a mother void of reason
That still; no excuse, to everyman his tent
Life gave tags, not power to destroy
That being said, who turned off the sun?
You know, you make me want to start doing poetry again. I love your rythm and the deepneSs of your words.
Great piece bruv
tnks sir, it wasn’t all me though
Hmmmm, powerful lines, I like..speaks of life
I’m impressed.
Much needed inspiration
Nice piece, 9.99 out of 10 :p
ahn! what happened to the remaining 0.01%?
Dis is nycc, more power to ur elbow
Good stuff, but the most rhyming to my untrained eyes the seemed to put the rhythm of the piece a little of balance. But good stuff again
thanks, would take note of that
Very good piece. Wonder why I’m just seeing it now. Loose* though
thanks, Don’t get the lose part though
Should Pandora be let lose?
oh pandora is a fabled box of legend supposed to contain chaos, so pandora being let lose means chaos being unleashed.
Oh dear. I was just trying to subtly correct the ‘lose’ to loose. I am familiar with the pandora’s box.
lool thanks i’ve corrected it